This one
is real.
A real screenplay. A real SA-EVAL assessment. Real criticism, published so you can judge the depth and reasoning for yourself.
Zero Sum
Zero Sum is a genuine feature screenplay written by ScriptAccess founder Keven Hollands. The evaluation shown here is the genuine SA-EVAL-1.2 assessment, including its criticism and revision priorities.
The score is
only the beginning.
Category scores
Premise, plot, character, dialogue and structure are assessed individually before the overall result is reached.
Detailed assessment
Strengths and weaknesses are explained through specific observations about the screenplay rather than generic reactions.
Market perspective
Commercial positioning and audience considerations are examined separately from the craft assessment.
Prioritised revision
The report identifies the changes most likely to materially strengthen the next draft, rather than producing an indiscriminate list of notes.
Don't take
our word for it.
A sample evaluation is only useful if it shows what the service actually delivers. Zero Sum was not created as marketing material and its evaluation was not rewritten to make ScriptAccess look better.
It received an overall score of 7/10 and a raw weighted score of 7.40. The report identifies what works, what does not, where the screenplay loses force and what should be addressed in the rewrite.
The purpose is transparency: read the evaluation and decide whether the reasoning earns the score.Same screenplay.
Two evaluations.
Judge for yourself.
Zero Sum received two very different assessments. Rather than tell you which evaluation to trust, we are publishing the screenplay and both evaluations so you can read the evidence and make up your own mind.
Read the complete screenplay→Zero Sum is the writer's genuine screenplay and the evaluations shown here are genuine evaluations of that work. The complete screenplay is available so both assessments can be read against the underlying material. ScriptAccess's evaluation was not rewritten or adjusted in response to the Black List evaluation.
The work first.
The evidence second.
The score last.
SA-EVAL is designed to make the reasoning behind an evaluation as important as the number attached to it.
A score should be the consequence of the assessment, not a number looking for an explanation afterwards.
We don't promise you a good score. We promise you a score we can explain.Your story.
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